I'm
in Verona, a city in northern Italy’s Veneto region. Looking at the
tiny balcony of Casa di Giulietta where
Juliet stood while Romeo declared his love, I've been inspired to update the script for Shakespeare's well-known balcony scene such that it will include my annotations and have a happy ending. The original dialogue lines from the play are
italicized.
Where'e'er
I go, my Soul shall stay with thee:
'Tis but my Shadow that I take away. - Dryden
'Tis but my Shadow that I take away. - Dryden
PROLOGUE
The night
begins like a hundred others before it. There is nothing to suggest
that anything is about to change. ROMEO
feels wonderfully invisible, as he stands
in the shadow of tall cypress trees behind which is tucked in an
ivy-covered fourteenth century house.
As
JULIET enters the balcony, her sweet, vulnerable air of
innocence immediately fills the surroundings. It is as if she had
lifted the atmosphere from stillness and given it a soul. She stares
out onto the inky gloom of the courtyard below, her dark lashes
quivering on her cheeks.
ROMEO
feels a flicker of disbelieving delight: But
wait, what’s that light in the window over there? It is the east,
and Juliet is the sun. He lets
out a long breath. There is a joyful swell in his chest. Look
how she leans her hand on her cheek. Oh, I wish I was the glove on
that hand so that I could touch that cheek.
JULIET
sighs,
her voice floating into the surroundings.
Oh, my!
ROMEO,
feeling faint joy as she speaks, mutters in a voice so low his words
seem carried by the breeze that brushes Juliet's upturned face: She
speaks. Oh, speak again, bright angel. You are as glorious as an
angel tonight.
JULIET,
not knowing ROMEO hears her, utters his
name repeatedly like a chant, pulling him in. Her voice is a low
rumble in his ears: Oh, Romeo, Romeo,
wherefore art thou, my Romeo? Then
her voice drops to a husky murmur. Why
do you have to be Romeo? Just swear you love me and I’ll stop being
a Capulet.
The
words leap from her mouth, or maybe her heart. She inclines
her head. Such loveliness, such grace in her gesture. And in it,
ROMEO reads both the beginning and the end of every lover's poem,
every romantic dream, every fairy tale that has ever been written.
ROMEO
mumbles to himself, his eyes crinkling at their corners: Should
I listen for more, or should I speak now?
JULIET,
still not knowing ROMEO hears her, says softly: It’s only your name that’s
my enemy. Oh, be some other name! The thing we call a rose would
smell just as sweet if we called it by any other name. She
closes her eyes and tries to hold the moment.
ROMEO's
thoughts
are lurching wildly back and forth.
His voice is clipped, as though he
wishes to waste no time, as he answers in a whisper that matches
hers: I trust your words. Just call me your
love, and I will take a new name. From now on I will never be Romeo
again. There
is nothing to fear, he assures her. Nothing at all.
JULIET
feels the slight blush rise in her cheeks: Who
are you? Why do you hide in the darkness and listen to my private
thoughts?
Without
missing a beat, ROMEO replies:
I don’t know how to tell you who I am. I
hate my name because my name is your enemy.
He steps
out onto the courtyard. Seeing him, she holds her gaze for what seems
like forever. He smiles and her heart quickens. They look at each
other in silence, as if a warm hand had closed around, protecting
them.
JULIET
finds
the words, but in a voice that trembles:
Our love, which right now is like a flower
bud, may turn out to be a beautiful flower by the
next time we meet. I’ll send a messenger to you, and you can pass
on a message telling me where and when we’ll be married.
ROMEO's
tone is soft and knowing: For if there were no winter, we can never
hope for spring. His eyes
warm on hers, and wise, he continues: Our spring will come.
He presses a hand over his heart, glimpsing her look of quiet pleasure: When you love, your soul breathes in. I've never been so sure of anything as I am sure that I have your heart.
He presses a hand over his heart, glimpsing her look of quiet pleasure: When you love, your soul breathes in. I've never been so sure of anything as I am sure that I have your heart.
She feels
his voice like an embrace, an arm of comfort around her shoulder.
EPILOGUE
The
simple sweetness of that captured moment, so potent with promise,
makes them feel like they are the only two people in the world, under
a thousand twinkling stars.
Enveloped in dreams of eternal love, they look over to the east. The
sky has begun its slow transformation from midnight to the limitless
blue-gray that precedes dawn and a passionate life ever
after.
Exeunt
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